We are becoming increasingly (dependent) on computers. They are used in business, crime (detection) and even to fly planes. What things will they be used for in future? Is this dependence on computers a good thing or should we be more (suspicious) of their benefits? Today computers are used almost everywhere, it is impossible to (imagine) our life without PCs, Internet, hand phones and other computer devices. It is (reasonable) that people look to the future of computers. Besides, computers make our life easier, we can easily get information about any (product) we plan to buy or place we plan to visit over a second using personal computer and Internet. Scientists (predict) that in the nearest future it will be possible to smell a new (perfume) using Internet and watch 3D scenes at home like we do in the (theater). According to (forecasts) of HR agencies machines will replace job of cashiers, civil and military pilots. Some (corporations) in Japan already selling housewife-robots, which help old people to keep their home clean. (Despite) the fact that computers help us, they make us dependent. (Apparently), people spend more time behind monitors that ever before. And some of them feel a need for more time to be (spent) with people in live contact. In addition, fall out of one of the important (modules) of specific computer can entail serious (consequences). Suffice to mention computer problem, occurred in the end of 1990s, problem concerned with coming year 2000 [Y2K] and (catastrophes) that were predicted. Fortunately imminent disasters did not happen. However, it is difficult to imagine what could be if all the predictions had occurred. We live in technological era, computers penetrated everywhere with all benefits they provide and all dangers they hide. However we are (satisfied) with them and sometimes we even thank them because they help us in (communicating), studying, doing business, entertaining and saving lives in critical situations. Great essay, (all the task points are covered), good language and structure. Looks like Band 7 to me.
