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托福写作—锻造地道英语句子

2012-03-01  点击:4081

托福作文句子修改:

1. The artist’s work pushes our civilization to a higher level.
改进:Artists’ work upgrades our civilization.

2. For example, you work in a big factory.
改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.

3. You’ll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.
改进:You’ll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.

4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.
改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.

5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.
改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.

6. Their brain is still very young.
改进: They are still immature.

7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.
改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.

8. They can’t analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.
改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.

9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.
改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.

10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.
改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.

11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.
改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.

12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.
改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.

13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.
改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.

14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.
改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.

15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.
改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products. 

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