I’m 17 years old. Now I’m a senior high school student. I never join a costume party,it's not popular in my city.If I did go to a costume some day, I would dress up in a comfortable costume no matter how funny looks like.

Most of time,I usually in sports clothes,because they are comfortable.But I'm a student,I have to wear silly school uniform.Neither warm nor beautiful."Why don't you wear jeans?"My friends always ask me."no,I don't like wear jeans.I like clothes which felt comfortable."I answerd.Jeans are really fit me,because I'm thin,But they are too tight for me.I like wear big clothes.In my wardrobe,you can find a lot of sports clothes.Except those,there will be nothing.As for school uniform,nothing can I say.It's expensive but the quality is not good.

You see,I really like sports clothes.And I also wish to wear a comfortable costume to join costume party.This is my frist paper submitted to E-say, I try to do my best.

 

 

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