One day I left my rubber  in my house.But i need it.i want my exercise got A.so I need to borrow it.
       I asked my classmate named Apple.You know,do not talk in my teacher li class.So I talked to Apple using my mouth but no sound and i maked a action like i am cleaning a word.so my friend undersand.she pass the rubber to me.oh ,my god.thanks sky and thanks land.The class was over.i return the rubber to her.i am very happy.

Having a good friend is lucky.If somebody need something ,i will help her or him.

 

Hi, Alicia. Your essay is fairly written, and descriptive. Good job on that! However, please observe the format in writing sentences. Remember that there should always be a space between a punctuation mark and the word after it. Also, it is better not to use interjections in your essay. Be careful with your word choices because the logic of the sentence is affected by it. Lastly, remember to use the past tense verb form when referring to actions that were already completed. Good luck on your next essay!