Last weekend,I went to the Summer Palace with my parents.We had a good time that day.
        We got up at six o'clock and then we took the bus for an hour to get there.There were a lot of people in the Summer Palace.The lines for buying tickets were very long.We waited and waited.In twenty minutes,we visted the Summer Palace.
      The Summer Palace was very big and grand.First,we saw the Suzhou Street.Then, we saw many palaces,they are very beautiful.Finally,we went boating on Kunming Lake.It's was very interesting.We all enjoyed it.

This trip was very exciting.We were very happy last weenkend.I think that we should visit the Summer Palace again,because it's really a good palace to traval.

 

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