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Describing Myself

 Do you know me?I'm a thirteen-year-old girl named Zhang Shichen.I'm from a small city of Jilin,China.I'm in grade eight,I'm a good student in school and I'm a sunny girl in my life.Now allow me to introduce myself in detail .

 I have an oval face and my eyebrows are crescent,I have a medium height.I think I'm not pretty,but many people said that I have a good ship and good temperament.Maybe it because of I practiced dance for five years.
   Besides dancing,I also have many other hobbies,such as doing sports,doing calligraphy,singing and so on.I love being outdoors and I take a trip every year.

 As you see,I have many hobbies and I enjoy my life.I try my best to do everything,so I get good grades and keep in good health,I'm really a confident,patient,active and talktive girl.
   After my introduction,do you want to make friends with me?I'm looking

Hi, Sue! All I can say is, it's a job well done! You described and introduced yourself very well. I'm pretty sure that many would like to make friends with you. With regards to your essay, it is really impressive. However, you should have a space after a comma or a period. Please take note of all the corrections made to your essay. Good work overall.