I want to be a scientist. I like science because I think the scinence is very easy and exciting. So I want be a scientist.

I had the goal I was 9 years old. I make an effort ,so I read science bookand magazine. I want many the invention. I will study hard math and science. I think scientist is very good people for example thw scientist make plane,car,etc. Many scientist.

Bestrow a prize so I want be a scientist. But math is difficult.so I am studying hard. The science need to people. The science is wonderful and very exaciting. I like math too.

  

 

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