I love holidays, On Holidays I can play a game, but I can’t play with my friends. There are things. I can do during the holidays and there are things that I can’t do.

I can play computer games, I can watching TV all day, I can take a rest all day, I can sleep all day and so on.

Sometimes I can’t play with my friends because guests are coming. I don’t have to do my home work, I don’t’t have to get up early in the moring and I don’t have to study.

So I love holidays.
 

Hello, Roy. Your essay was good, and you were able to talk about the topic very well. Your sentences were simple yet understandable, but please be careful with your verbs. It should always agree with the subject, and you should always use the correct tense. Please do not use coordinating conjunctions like ‘but’ or ‘so ’ to start a sentence as this may cause sentence fragments that are considered as incomplete. Try other conjunctions like ‘however’ or ‘hence’ instead.