I think wild animals can be reared as pets, because wild animals have many good points as pets, and they are different from only gentle and cute pets. In this essay, I am going to talk about wild animals should be reared as pets, and the reasons why I think this way.

Rearing wild animals is our choice. Everyone has different personal tastes, so one person like gentle animals, but the other person likes wild animals. Wild animals can be nicer pets than gentle animals. Pet wild animals are unique, and interesting, so they can be loved as pets. Also, wild animals can protect us, too. If the wild animals are reared our pet, the can catch thieves, and can save their owners from the risks. There are many people who was saved by their pets. They also have different charms from small and gentle pets.

The second reason, we also can domesticate wild animals. In fact, there are many people who domesticated wild animals, so their animals became gentle and not so wild. If the wild animals are violent, we can domesticate. If we domesticate and train wild animals well, they become gentle and not harmful for neighbors, so wild animals can be gentle with domesticating.

Many people think wild animals are very violent and fierce, but wild animals have many good points and different charms from cute and small pets. If we domesticate and train wild animals well, wild animals also can be reared as pets.
 

 

Hello, Emily! Excellent work on your essay! You were able to express yourself very well. Your ideas were well-sequenced, properly organized, and they were very relevant to the essay topic that was given to you. Just be careful with your spelling next time and with your verb tenses as well. Practice paraphrasing your sentences to avoid redundancy and study more on the different functions of words (verbs-“domesticate”; adjectives-“domesticated”; and nouns-“domestication”) and how to use them. Good work!