What month ago I went to a forest.              

I saw a pant,a tree and many animals.

Forest’s natural things are grasses, trees and plants etc.

And plants and animals are snakes,lions,tigers foxes and trees and others.

Forest are offer oxyen us.

I see to forest so my mind is comfortable.

Forests are offer resources us.
 

Hello, Julie. Your essay is very interesting. However, please remember to be careful with the choice of words. The logic of the sentence is affected by it.. Also, please remember to use the best choice of words among a set of synonymous words in order to achieve the effect you are trying to bring out. Furthermore, please remember to avoid starting your sentence with a conjunction. Doing these will cause incomplete or hanging sentences. Overall, Good job！Keep practicing.