Variety of animals in nature, some animals live in the trees.
       In nature, birds are the most beautiful
       They live in trees ,Because there is relatively safe,Can prevent Predator attacks 。Monkeys live in trees ，Because trees have a lot of food。the squirrels also live in the trees。 Predator Generally do not climb trees ，There is safe。
Leopards sometimes climb trees ，Because it can prey hidden in the trees，Prevent other predators eat 。The Cats sometimes climb trees ,Because they like the quiet, do not love to be disturbed,.but also to prevent hunters hunting.
       Many animals live in trees, they are very interesting,I like them.

 

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